I really like this one. I was in that field with you, staring at a glorious sky, while somewhere else, total destruction. But I didn't care. For the moment.
Thank you Karen. I was in the Place de la République in Strasbourg.
Lying on the grass surrounded by flowers and stone architecture of the Palaus du Rhin but all I could see, in my mind’s eye, was the utter mindless war destroying lives in Iran.
Wow. This is beautiful, the impact of your words hits hard.
Thank you Midnight Scribbler. Much appreciated.
So beautiful and such vivid imagery !
Thank you so much Aaliya. Much appreciated.
This was very good. Great descriptive snippets. Short lines. Skinny poem. It does read like the attention span is short. I can relate.
Thank you so much Mónica.
Yes I was trying to create a role model in my poem so that I might lose weight myself!
I doubt it will work! 😅
If it works, let me know. I’ll start writing skinny poems daily.
😂👍
Very emotional. Visual imagery was excellent. Brings home the power of war.
Thank you Stephanie that means a lot.
Much appreciated for taking the time to leave the kind comments.
I really like this one. I was in that field with you, staring at a glorious sky, while somewhere else, total destruction. But I didn't care. For the moment.
Thank you Karen. I was in the Place de la République in Strasbourg.
Lying on the grass surrounded by flowers and stone architecture of the Palaus du Rhin but all I could see, in my mind’s eye, was the utter mindless war destroying lives in Iran.